a journey called...: The Hug

Monday, October 17, 2011

The Hug

Holding close,
You whispered.
"take it all".

Breathing in a hug-
I took your warmth.
Took your unsaid words.
Took back my sharp accuses.

Took the reason to smile at peace.

20 comments:

Anonymous said...: I LOVE... :); October 17, 2011 at 6:41 PM
The Orange Tree said...: soft and loving.; October 17, 2011 at 7:22 PM
Saru Singhal said...: Beautiful, second last line is awesome:)

Saru; October 17, 2011 at 11:00 PM
Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barry said...: love it,

shirt and powerful.; October 18, 2011 at 7:20 AM
Maxwell Mead Williams Robinson Barry said...: love it,

shirt and powerful.; October 18, 2011 at 7:21 AM
JANU said...: Baby this is wonderful.; October 18, 2011 at 10:29 PM
The Noiseless Cuckooclock said...: beautiful warmth.; October 19, 2011 at 9:57 PM
Classic NYer said...: This evoked so many memories for me... wow...; October 20, 2011 at 3:18 AM
Ann LeFlore said...: emotional soft and loving
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/18/mirror-of-truth/; October 20, 2011 at 6:47 AM
Kay said...: This piece is very warm and beautiful. I like it very much. Thank you!; October 20, 2011 at 10:44 AM
Manoj Kewalramani said...: Nicely done... something about accepting such an emotion is quite liberating.. :)

here's me this week: http://manojramani.com/?p=517; October 20, 2011 at 12:33 PM
S said...: Tender, deep and lovely :); October 20, 2011 at 4:17 PM
shail said...: Oh this is just too lovely. Sigh.; October 20, 2011 at 10:11 PM
The Poet said...: Hello.
So much can be said with a hug.
Beautiful sentiments & imagery.

Thanks for sharing.

Bashful Lady; October 20, 2011 at 10:51 PM
Linda Bob Grifins Korbetis Hall said...: sweet.

well done.

:); October 23, 2011 at 8:28 AM
Jack Edwards Poetry said...: Great last line.; October 23, 2011 at 10:16 PM
Rahul Bhatia said...: Lovely read!; November 2, 2011 at 9:55 AM
Anonymous said...: Well...take that! Very well put.
ZQ; November 5, 2011 at 8:38 PM
The Orange Tree said...: sweet read.; November 6, 2011 at 5:49 AM
Sara said...: touched my heart; December 25, 2011 at 12:51 AM

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