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Saturday, April 17, 2010

quiet sojourn

A drizzle or two,
The chirpy morning 
Made way
For another 
Silent evening.

My umbrella
The patting rain song.
My feet are
Dragging me up 
The undiscovered slope.

Down below 
I can still see
The hill town.

Further down
Flows the 
Gurgling river.


Zave said...

One thing that I love in your verses is the fact that it seems so picturesque even though you the verses are not very descriptive.
Loved this one as well.

wanderer said...

@ zave thank you for your well thought out comment. I know my verses are less descriptve than my fact this was worse even few months ago.
may be I will take more time to simplify things.