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Sunday, November 7, 2010

waitng for you






Alone I stand,
Waiting for you to call me back,
Alone I stand,
Hoping
This world
Has more to give me
Still.
And that you
Still believe
In me,
In the same
old way...

Waiting for you
To come
and take me
home
once again.

(thanks Andy for the image and to know more all readers should click here)

19 comments:

Brian Miller said...

wonderful take on the prompt...i think the world has much to offer and i hope they get there soon to carry you home...smiles.

Reflections said...

I hope they are as consistent as the sea tides... lovely poem.

dustus said...

That feeling of waiting... for a call back or to know someone else does or doesn't care. Your words go very well with the image. Thanks for joining in the prompt mix today :)

D2 said...

This is the one feeling of waiting that can fill one with pure joy. Lovely poem. :)

Claudia said...

i like how you turn from the loneliness to the waiting - to the hope that resonates like the waves heading for the shore..

M.L. Gallagher said...

Ah yes, the waiting.

Lovely take on the photo prompt. Really nice.

Melissa Campbell said...

Waiting can be so hard sometimes, and makes going home a delight. I like how you ended. Blessings!

hedgewitch said...

Good capture of the mood of the photo. The sea itself seems waiting here.

Shan said...

Amazing how we all pick up on the loneliness on this photograph. Excellent writing!

Pete Marshall said...

wonderfully written..you have captured that loneliness....that reaches our from this piece cheers pete

libithina said...

Andys pic was a great inspiration ~ you can get that feeling of waiting with the waves ~ and your write conveyed that snese perfectly ~ lovely

Pranab said...

indeed simple is beautiful... and credit goes to u for the selection of picture...

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magiceye said...

heartfelt call....

Pratibha The Talent said...

waiting period will end soon with the beautiful poem.

Amropali said...

Reminds me of the French Lieutenant's woman

nice write.

Aashi said...

beautiful..

Jidhu Jose said...

nice ......did u waiting for the bus?? Hahaha....

Known Stranger said...

your poem kept me thinking may be suiting my presnt mood