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Monday, October 17, 2011

The Hug



Holding close,
You whispered.
"take it all".

Breathing in a hug-
I took your warmth.
Took your unsaid words.
Took back my sharp accuses.

Took the reason to smile at peace.

20 comments:

Ege said...

I LOVE... :)

The Orange Tree said...

soft and loving.

Saru Singhal said...

Beautiful, second last line is awesome:)

Saru

Morning said...

love it,

shirt and powerful.

Morning said...

love it,

shirt and powerful.

JANU said...

Baby this is wonderful.

The Noiseless Cuckooclock said...

beautiful warmth.

Classic NYer said...

This evoked so many memories for me... wow...

Ann LeFlore said...

emotional soft and loving
http://gatelesspassage.com/2011/10/18/mirror-of-truth/

Kay said...

This piece is very warm and beautiful. I like it very much. Thank you!

Manoj Kewalramani said...

Nicely done... something about accepting such an emotion is quite liberating.. :)

here's me this week: http://manojramani.com/?p=517

Sourav said...

Tender, deep and lovely :)

shail said...

Oh this is just too lovely. Sigh.

Andy said...

Hello.
So much can be said with a hug.
Beautiful sentiments & imagery.

Thanks for sharing.

Bashful Lady

The Cello Strings said...

sweet.

well done.

:)

Jack Edwards Poetry said...

Great last line.

Rahul Bhatia said...

Lovely read!

Anonymous said...

Well...take that! Very well put.
ZQ

The Orange Tree said...

sweet read.

Sara said...

touched my heart